Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Death

How does someone deal with death?
You can remember it like it was yesterday
Your parents sit you up on the counter to tell you the news
You come home from school waiting for you loving old dog
But nothing comes to greet you
Your on vacation  and you think it will be great
The phone rings, and someone I love is gone
How does someone so young deal with death?
No one will ever know until they see it themselves

3 comments:

  1. Really good job!! It made me wander actually how we do deal with death. If someone has died, most likely we were to young to really understand. It showed here that we really dont know what to do. I love it :)!!!

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  2. Good job Sarah! I agree with Makenzie; how do we deal with death? Different people have different ways of dealing with it and some people just don't know how to. You did a great job with this piece Sarah!It really makes you think.

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  3. I reallyyyyyy! liked this! You did a really good job. The only thing that could improve this piece is word choice. Other then that, it was really good(:

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